Is anyone interested in feedbacking a mod plan write-up?

[Domi]

Heya, everyone! I was taking a break from actual writing today and instead organized the ideas and created a conceptual document for my dream NWN2 campaign. While the side-quests are not described, just listed, I have a detailed description of the key things that are going to happen and the logic/backstory behind it. What I want to know if I have any terrible plot-holes to fill in, weaknesses or if the whole thing is insanely boring, etc. It's about 5 pages 12 points Times New Roman.

 

Thank you in advance!

[Twani]

I can't guarentee I'll be any sort of super help, but I would be glad to look over it and see if I can find any plot holes or anything.

[Kaeloree]

Sure, I'll give it a read through and a comment

[Domi]

Oh, awsome! I think that would be enough for my purposes right now. I'll send the file to you guys, and thank you!