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theacefes

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Very nicely done. ;)

 

The chapter was a nice set up and left me wanting to know more about the characters.

 

Vicki seems odd. :thumbsup:

 

The only thing I could suggest would be to perhaps space between the paragraphs, as to make for easier reading, but that could just be because my eyes aren't the greatest.

 

Again, nice work.

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