[BG1] Note to Translators: new lines in French needed

[jastey]

For v14 I'd need new lines in French! Also, the EE part of the French translation is not done yet.

Files from v13 that still need translations:

• AJANTIS_EE.TRA (96 lines)
• AJANTISBG1_TRANSITION.TRA (5 lines plus new lines as listed below)
• BG_INTERJECTIONS.TRA: lines @9-@11
• CROSSMOD.TRA (1 line)
• SETUP-AJANTISBG1.TRA: lines @16-@22
• SOD_ROMANCEREACTIONS.TRA (14 lines)

Here are the new lines for AJANTISBG1_TRANSITION.TRA not yet present in v13:

Spoiler

@6  = ~Sarevok is dead! Finally, the murderer of your foster-father is defeated.~
@7  = ~How do you feel, love?~
@8  = ~This is the moment of your triumph, <CHARNAME>! We should savor it.~
@9  = ~I am very much relieved, indeed.~
@10  = ~He was so much more than that. We prevented a war!~
@11  = ~It's too soon to answer that question. I need time to understand it's over.~
@12  = ~He got what he deserved.~
@13  = ~Shh, Ajantis, don't distract me from examining my "half-brother"'s armor. Seems to be quite powerful gear!~
@14  = ~I feel exhausted, sweaty, and a little hungry.~
@15  = ~And rightfully so.~
@16  = ~That we did, and we can be proud of our deeds.~
@17  = ~I can understand that it takes time to realize our accomplishments.~
@18  = ~Surely you feel more than that? A deeper sense of our accomplishments?~
@19  = ~You are not planning on wearing those from now?... They were the characteristics of Sarevok and his ill schemes. We should put those aside, powerful or not.~
@20  = ~I will stay at your side as long as you still have need of me. I am looking forward to returning to my Order in Athkatla, though, as I fulfilled my quest to receive knighthood.~
@21  = ~I will stay at your side as long as you still have need of me, and will treasure every moment of it. Still, it urges me to travel to my parents to seek their approval. I am also looking forward to returning to Athkatla to my Order, as I fulfilled my quest to receive knighthood.~

@22  = ~Korlasz begged for her life before you killed her, <CHARNAME>.~

Here is the according d-file snippet:

Spoiler

CHAIN
IF WEIGHT #-1
~Global("C#Ajantis_BG1SarevokDefeated","GLOBAL",1)~ THEN ~%AJANTIS_JOINED%~ sarevokdead_bg1
@6 /* ~Sarevok is dead! Finally, the murderer of your foster-father is defeated.~ */ DO ~SetGlobal("C#Ajantis_BG1SarevokDefeated","GLOBAL",2)~
== %AJANTIS_JOINED% IF ~Global("X#AjantisRomanceActive","GLOBAL",2)~ THEN @7 /* ~How do you feel, love?~ */
== %AJANTIS_JOINED% IF ~!Global("X#AjantisRomanceActive","GLOBAL",2)~ THEN @8 /* ~This is the moment of your triumph, <CHARNAME>! We should savor it.~ */
END
++ @9 /* ~I am very much releaved, indeed.~ */ + sarevokdead_bg1_01
++ @10 /* ~He was so much more than that. We prevented a war!~ */ + sarevokdead_bg1_02
++ @11 /* ~It's too soon to answer that question. I need time to understand it's over.~ */ + sarevokdead_bg1_03
++ @12 /* ~He got what he deserved.~ */ + sarevokdead_bg1_01
+ ~OR(2)
PartyHasItem("c#stsrva")
PartyHasItem("c#stsrvh")~ + @13 /* ~Shh, Ajantis, don't distract me from examining my "half-brother"'s armor. Seems to be quite powerful gear!~ */ + sarevokdead_bg1_05
++ @14 /* ~I feel exhausted, sweaty, and a little hungry.~ */ + sarevokdead_bg1_04

APPEND ~%AJANTIS_JOINED%~

IF ~~ THEN sarevokdead_bg1_01
SAY @15 /* ~And rightfully so.~ */
IF ~~ THEN + sarevokdead_bg1_06
IF ~Global("X#AjantisRomanceActive","GLOBAL",2)~ THEN + sarevokdead_bg1_07
END

IF ~~ THEN sarevokdead_bg1_02
SAY @16 /* ~That we did, and we can be proud of our deeds.~ */
IF ~~ THEN + sarevokdead_bg1_06
IF ~Global("X#AjantisRomanceActive","GLOBAL",2)~ THEN + sarevokdead_bg1_07
END

IF ~~ THEN sarevokdead_bg1_03
SAY @17 /* ~I can understand that it takes time to realize our accomplishments.~ */
IF ~~ THEN + sarevokdead_bg1_06
IF ~Global("X#AjantisRomanceActive","GLOBAL",2)~ THEN + sarevokdead_bg1_07
END

IF ~~ THEN sarevokdead_bg1_04
SAY @18 /* ~Surely you feel more than that? A deeper sense of our accomplishments?~ */
IF ~~ THEN + sarevokdead_bg1_06
IF ~Global("X#AjantisRomanceActive","GLOBAL",2)~ THEN + sarevokdead_bg1_07
END

IF ~~ THEN sarevokdead_bg1_05
SAY @19 /* ~You are not planning on wearing those from now?... They were the characteristics of Sarevok and his ill schemes. We should put those aside, powerful or no.~ */
IF ~~ THEN + sarevokdead_bg1_06
IF ~Global("X#AjantisRomanceActive","GLOBAL",2)~ THEN + sarevokdead_bg1_07
END

IF ~~ THEN sarevokdead_bg1_06
SAY @20 /* ~I will stay at your side as long as you still have need of me. I am looking foreward to returning to Athkatla to my Order, though, as I fulfilled my quest to receive knighthood.~ */
IF ~~ THEN EXIT
END

IF ~~ THEN sarevokdead_bg1_07
SAY @21 /* ~I will stay at your side as long as you still have need of me, and will treasure every moment of it. Still, it urges me to travel to my parents to seek their approval. I am also looking foreward to returning to Athkatla to my Order, as I fulfilled my quest to receive knighthood.~ */
IF ~~ THEN EXIT
END

END //APPEND

Thank you in advance!

[Arthas]

@9 releaved = should be relieved

@19 powerful or noT (?)

@20 foreward = forward 
Second suggestion= to athkaltla to my order ----> to my order in Athkaltla (?)

@21 = foreward = forward

 

Edited January 25, 2020 by Arthas

[jastey]

@Arthas thanks! Yes, proof-reading the English texts is always a good idea, too.

EDIT: first post updated.

[Arthas]

Consider also changing

@19 You are not planning on wearing those from now on?

But someone more proficient in English may say the statement you wrote is fine.

[jastey]

I just realized the French version is not completed at all. I'll edit the first post! EDIT: done

[Gwendolyne]

Hi @jastey As Ajantis translator has retired from the d'Oghmatiques, I will have a look at the missing lines. But I need time.

[jastey]

@Gwendolyne Great, thank you! No pressure. I started this thread thinking it's only the new lines for v14.

EDIT: one more line added to AJANTISBG1_TRANSITION.TRA

[Gwendolyne]

As I am slowly recovering from acute bronchitis, I need time to update all the SHS projects, plus my contributions to other mods. So I won't promise anything for another week or two.

 

[jastey]

On 1/26/2020 at 11:49 AM, Gwendolyne said:

As I am slowly recovering from acute bronchitis, I need time to update all the SHS projects, plus my contributions to other mods. So I won't promise anything for another

... I expected "year" or so after that!

Get well, and don't forget to take a break!

[Gwendolyne]

I will need time to adapt my translation to Galathée's style and tone.

[jastey]

Take all the time you need! Thank you for all your work.

[jastey]

In v16 there will be two new lines @23  + @24  in SETUP-AJANTISBG1.TRA.

 

[Gwendolyne]

will do it after updating elminster's mods for Xmas. And send you the previous lines that have been translated a while ago...

[jastey]

Thanks!