Bri Posted February 18, 2004 Share Posted February 18, 2004 You have a nice, clear writing style, and it shows that you do know how to make your language work for you. Heh, if I had any complaint it would be that I would love to see an expansion of what you wrote. I realize that it was meant to just be a short story, but I would have loved to see it longer. (And no, I wouldn't have minded if people made comment stuff on my works. On the other hand, I am taking a bit of hiatus from my own stuff...) Link to comment
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