Sample Viconia - Del ToB banter...

[Bri]

It still is being worked on, but there has been some progress:

 

Delainy - Viconia 1

 

Viconia: "Boredom grows ever drearier on the surface."

 

Delainy: "Well, if you want excitement, just remove your cowl in front of a mob. I'm sure that will give you all the excitement you could want."

 

Viconia: "Petty insults? You are coming along nicely, iblith. However, you need to put more venom in your invective."

 

Delainy: "Whatever, Viconia. Rather than hear you complain, let's try something else."

 

Viconia: "Very well, wael. I warn you, though, it better be amusing..."

 

Delainy:

"Everyone knows someone we’d be better off without,

But best not mention names, for we know not who’s about.

But why commit a murder, and risk the fires of hell,

When black widows in the privy can do it just as well."

 

Viconia: "This is showing some promise, for a change."

 

Delainy:

"Now, poison’s good, and daggers, and arrows in the back,

And if you’re really desperate, you can try a front attack.

But are they really worth the risk of being caught

When black widows in the privy need not be bribed or bought? "

 

Delainy:

"So if there’s one of whom you wish most simply to be rid,

Just wait until dark, then point the way to way the widows hid,

And say to them, 'I think you’ll find that this one is the best,'

And black widows in the privy will gladly do the rest."

 

Viconia: "That was...acceptable."

 

Delainy: "Faint praise from you indeed. I'm glad that you found it amusing."

 

Viconia: "Amusing and...nostalgic."

 

Delainy: "Nostalgic?"

 

Viconia: "I removed an older sister and a second cousin that way. Of course, you would have thought the cousin would have learned from my sister, but there is no helping some drow."

[Magnus_025]

It's just awesome Bri! This mod is going to be one of the best ever made. This banter, as the others, shows your creativity. Del and Viconia don't like each other and they are still able to have an ironic chat, just like it happens in real life between two girls that hate each other.

Please, if your real life let you, continue working on this. And I hope you are completly recovered from your tetanus shot.

Bye! and thanks for this mod, even if it is not finished yet.

[Kulyok]

Just wait until dark, then point the way to way the widows hid,

 

"point the way to way" - I think there's a typo somewhere in there, or a repetition.

 

 

Del and Viconia don't like each other and they are still able to have an ironic chat, just like it happens in real life between two girls that hate each other.

 

Trust me, you do not want to see what happens in real life between two _Russian_ girls who hate each other.

(Unless your Blue Cross is paid off... )

[Bri]

Nope, the repitition wasn't intended Kulyouk.

 

And yes, I'm pretty much over the shot. And I am still working on the mod, though I'm struggling with one tiny bit on Tashia (which is almost done)

[Garfield]

Speaking of repetition:

 

"Well, if you want excitement, just remove your cowl in front of a mob. I'm sure that will give you all the excitement you could want."

 

Maybe you could replace the seond "excitement" by "adrenaline" or something like that.. But I'm (unfortunately) no wordsmith...

 

Good job on the ironic poems

[Bri]

Hence the reason why it is still a work in progress