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KIrving

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Both these stories are slick, snappy, sexy and funny!

 

@TakeOut, Wonderful descriptive word choices. I particularly liked "autumn-wreathed" as a description of Cecilia's face. Ahh... poor Timothy, if only he had really listened to the lyrics of those songs.

Cecilia, you're breaking my heart, you're shaking my confidence daily. Oh Cecilia.....

 

@NonCompliance, Loved Damocles! "biologically impaired" :p *snort*

Wonderful twist at the end.

 

I really enjoyed these stories, Bri. :p

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Both these stories are slick, snappy, sexy and funny!

Glad you liked them KIrving :p

 

Ahh... poor Timothy, if only he had really listened to the lyrics of those songs.

Cecilia, you're breaking my heart, you're shaking my confidence daily. Oh Cecilia.....

 

Would you believe I never heard of that song? I had to look it up and see it was a Simon and Garfunkel one. But yes, appropriate as well :p

 

@NonCompliance, Loved Damocles! "biologically impaired" *snort*

Wonderful twist at the end.

 

Well, I have some other things in mind for Damocles, and why such a person would know of the supernatural (

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