Devin23 Posted May 24, 2004 Share Posted May 24, 2004 Loki, you naughty naughty writer. You know i'd jump on the first opportunity to read any fanfic that focuses on the story of the PC and Imoen. Plenty of "Vivid" descriptions on the limes. I hope you continue with the story, you know once you start wrting, it's hard to keep the pen, in this case, the keyboard, down. -Devin Link to comment
Loké Posted May 24, 2004 Share Posted May 24, 2004 Loki, you naughty naughty writer. You know i'd jump on the first opportunity to read any fanfic that focuses on the story of the PC and Imoen. Plenty of "Vivid" descriptions on the limes. I hope you continue with the story, you know once you start wrting, it's hard to keep the pen, in this case, the keyboard, down. -Devin ::bows:: Well I wanted to be the first! And yes... the writing bug has bitten. Link to comment
Userunfriendly Posted May 24, 2004 Share Posted May 24, 2004 Loki, you naughty naughty writer.  You know i'd jump on the first opportunity to read any fanfic that focuses on the story of the PC and Imoen.  Plenty of "Vivid" descriptions on the limes.  I hope you continue with the story, you know once you start wrting, it's hard to keep the pen, in this case, the keyboard, down. -Devin ::bows:: Well I wanted to be the first! And yes... the writing bug has bitten. unfortunately, no cure... good stuff...more please??? i really like the idea of the happy couple going back to candlekeep... and you handle the reunions better than some stories i've read... Link to comment
Loké Posted May 25, 2004 Share Posted May 25, 2004 Well that was practically two days of solid typing that, so you'll probably (Read: hopefully) get more this weekend. But don't be shocked if it's less than this bit. Link to comment
Bri Posted May 31, 2004 Share Posted May 31, 2004 A fine ending, though I will admit it did seem a bit rushed to me. Of course, I've done as much myself when trying to write. Link to comment
Loké Posted May 31, 2004 Share Posted May 31, 2004 Well, what do you think I should spin out more? I think Kietach absorbing the fact myself. Link to comment
Bri Posted May 31, 2004 Share Posted May 31, 2004 Actually the rushed I meant was that some of the transitions were a little more disjointed than previous offerings. I think the amount of time you spent on Kietach's brooding...and his own self-realization though was almost perfect. Link to comment
Loké Posted June 1, 2004 Share Posted June 1, 2004 Yes, I thoguht the brooding was a wee bit short too. I'll have to look at that. Link to comment
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