Bri Posted October 27, 2007 Share Posted October 27, 2007 Sorry it took me this long to read (been busy, and whatnot). Definitely a good story, and it looks like Aklon did pursue his own monk training. Heh, and yes, letting Aziz decide on which path he wishes his life to go would be the way of the monk... “No. I think the lesson is well taken.†“Thank you.†“Do not thank me. You have not yet begun your battle training.†Make him regret coming back, eh? Link to comment
BigRob Posted November 4, 2007 Share Posted November 4, 2007 Sorry it took me this long to read (been busy, and whatnot). Definitely a good story, and it looks like Aklon did pursue his own monk training. Heh, and yes, letting Aziz decide on which path he wishes his life to go would be the way of the monk... Thanks for reading and commenting, I'm glad it seems to have come out well, and that Aklon's monkish tendencies came out in the text, even though he's a bit of a minor character in this. The bit with Aziz was definiely something I wanted to illustrate that with. While he is willing to help the boy, the boy has to be willing to make the first step on his own. “No. I think the lesson is well taken.†“Thank you.†“Do not thank me. You have not yet begun your battle training.†Make him regret coming back, eh? Well, he does have to get punished somehow. Link to comment
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