Guest Guest Posted July 13, 2006 Share Posted July 13, 2006 This fifth poem, a rondelet, will be my last for awhile. I hope you have enjoyed reading them. It's been fun conversing with some of you, and I'll be back to share more. Bye, for now. Link to comment
EiriktheScald Posted July 13, 2006 Author Share Posted July 13, 2006 Ah, yeah, right -- I forgot to log in. Sorry. [Edit] In the mean time if you want to leave comments, that would be great! Link to comment
EiriktheScald Posted July 25, 2006 Author Share Posted July 25, 2006 I've been constantly revising the first poem. I think, the way it stands now, I'm finally satisfied; it captures the proper tone and logical progression--for me anyway. But I'd like to hear from everyone else. I've been out of practice writing poems for many years. Anyone care to comment, please?!? Link to comment
BigRob Posted July 26, 2006 Share Posted July 26, 2006 The ending now seems to fit better into the poem than it did before, the progression does seem smoother now. Though from memory, I think the previous incarnation's beginning was slightly better than it is now. Link to comment
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