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Small typo in Xan's romance


lac

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In LT 3, the one that begins 'You look pensive':

 

Answer that Candlekeep was a prison. Xan comes back with:

 

Still Charname>

 

(so it looks as if you are missing a < so the name is not filled in properly.

 

While we are there ...

 

It continues with 'I was meaning to ask for a while'. This reads more naturally in English as 'I have been meaning to ask for a while, because the 'meaning to' has been going on for a while and is

still going on. Indeed, you can leave out the 'for a while'. "I have been meaning to ask you something" already says that the 'meaning to' has been going on for a while. (But leaving it

in is ok, too.)

 

Laura

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Searched for all instances of malformed token CHARNAME.

@113  = ~Still... CHARNAME>, I was meaning to ask for a while. Was Gorion your foster father, perhaps, since you are of different heritage? If so, your real parents might still be alive. Do you know who they were?~

 

repaired token and matched grammar:

 

@113  = ~Still... <CHARNAME>, I have been meaning to ask for a while. Was Gorion your foster father, perhaps, since you are of different heritage? If so, your real parents might still be alive. Do you know who they were?~

 

repaired 11/22/2008 prerelease v17

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