Dancer Fitz Posted September 25, 2004 Share Posted September 25, 2004 That was quite nice. It flowed almost seamlessly, and you don't beat the reader over the head with any ideas. The imagery was conveyed with ease. I found it elegant, engaging and nicely arranged. =) I mean, it's 4am, I'm tired as poo, and I still stayed up to finish it. Link to comment
cliffette Posted September 25, 2004 Share Posted September 25, 2004 Really, really lovely. You've fit in alot of character and feeling into what is a short piece. Like Dancer, I also found it elegant and the exposition was well done (ie not overdone!). Link to comment
Threadspinner Posted September 25, 2004 Share Posted September 25, 2004 Thank you very much, both of you, for reviewing. I was trying not to belabor the point there at the end, so I'm glad it didn't come off as overly heavy-handed. And extra thanks to Fitz for staying up! Link to comment
Bri Posted September 27, 2004 Share Posted September 27, 2004 Very good, and almost sublime. Truthfully, the only problem with your piece I have a problem with isn't in the content or anything, but more on how it was put in. You may wish to put spaces between the separate topics, and such to make it easier to read. Link to comment
Guest Guest_Shadowhawke Posted October 25, 2004 Share Posted October 25, 2004 Threadspinner, this is one of the most beautiful pieces I have read. . Well done... you have enscapulated 'beauty' very, very well. Link to comment
Userunfriendly Posted October 27, 2004 Share Posted October 27, 2004 wow. nothing more needs to be said... wow. wow... wow... superb...the ending was just done perfectly...i literally started tearing..it was that good... Link to comment
Threadspinner Posted November 14, 2004 Share Posted November 14, 2004 Thank you to Bri, ShadowHawke, and Userunfriendly for leaving reviews! Sorry about the funky formatting, I'm highly inexperienced with message boarding. I hope it doesn't make it too painful to read. And Userunfriendly, I'm glad it provoked a reaction in you. I know I've started to tear up a bit reading some of your fics as well, but for the opposite reason... they're so funny! Especially 'Knights Who Wear Naughty Lingerie.' I thought I was going to rupture something reading it! Link to comment
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