Userunfriendly Posted April 18, 2004 Share Posted April 18, 2004 OK, I just posted before i really started to polish it...i got impatient... is it sick??? is it twisted??? did i make you hurl??? most importantly, did i get the references to pulp fiction working right??? Link to comment
jester Posted April 18, 2004 Share Posted April 18, 2004 I just watched Quentin's take at this unique story and I must say it captures the feel pretty well though Gogo does not feature as prominently as warranted by her skirt and sneakers . Your names are not as caring. Your Rishi died friendly not just whispering 'those are the new Beckham sneakers, right' (*drops to the right* I never got what really flew through the air, ie what got cut off, since the head seemed in place). I like it, but cannot understand the rating. I mean Finding Nemo and Bambi that is gore and horror in abundance. Waiting for your next installment on wednesday. Link to comment
Userunfriendly Posted April 18, 2004 Author Share Posted April 18, 2004 I just watched Quentin's take at this unique story and I must say it captures the feel pretty well though Gogo does not feature as prominently as warranted by her skirt and sneakers . Your names are not as caring. Your Rishi died friendly not just whispering 'those are the new Beckham sneakers, right' (*drops to the right* I never got what really flew through the air, ie what got cut off, since the head seemed in place). I like it, but cannot understand the rating. I mean Finding Nemo and Bambi that is gore and horror in abundance. Waiting for your next installment on wednesday. thank you!!! darn...i forgot gogo is the schoolgirl's name... i made it rated r for the little sicko scene with gumby and pokey... I just had to include the little transvestite sequence "yo, joe" for the homage to pulp fiction...and i wasn't really up to writing a long and bloody fight sequence...as you may have guessed, i wrote the whole story around the last two lines.. "i will kill mr. bill"...i tend to write stories completely based on the joke at the end... so yes, i actually wrote the joke "kill mr. bill" and wrote the story to lead up to that stinker... Link to comment
jester Posted April 18, 2004 Share Posted April 18, 2004 I just must say after a third read through: There is a GIJoe in all of us I bet. . I think the 'Mr.' gives it a funny sound. Mr. Bill might be the janitor or the local milkman, but real villains don't need no pleasantries like that. A good read. Link to comment
Userunfriendly Posted April 18, 2004 Author Share Posted April 18, 2004 I just must say after a third read through: There is a GIJoe in all of us I bet. . I think the 'Mr.' gives it a funny sound. Mr. Bill might be the janitor or the local milkman, but real villains don't need no pleasantries like that. A good read. Oh, i see.... you've never watched "The Mr. Bill Show" on saturday night live.... http://www.mrbill.com/ does the story make more sense now??? :D its a spoof... Link to comment
BigRob Posted April 19, 2004 Share Posted April 19, 2004 is it sick??? is it twisted??? did i make you hurl??? Yes, yes, no. But you did make me worry. Again. Still. A demented Terrantino Toy Story is so you UU. Link to comment
Userunfriendly Posted April 19, 2004 Author Share Posted April 19, 2004 is it sick??? is it twisted??? did i make you hurl??? Yes, yes, no. But you did make me worry. Again. Still. A demented Terrantino Toy Story is so you UU. its dementia, squared...tarantino is pretty twisted, and i added twist to it.. thanks!!! Link to comment
jester Posted April 19, 2004 Share Posted April 19, 2004 Oh, stupid me! I thought about the possibility of some Mr. Bill for a sec. :D No I did not know that one before. Link to comment
Userunfriendly Posted April 19, 2004 Author Share Posted April 19, 2004 Oh, stupid me! I thought about the possibility of some Mr. Bill for a sec. :D No I did not know that one before. well, saturday night live hasn't showed a mr bill show in a long time...yes, i am old... Link to comment
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