BobTokyo Posted July 26, 2004 Share Posted July 26, 2004 Very nice. Wasn't expecting that ending, and if you were drawing on a myth or folktale it ended with a varient I've never heard of. Experimental or no, well done. Link to comment
Domi Posted July 26, 2004 Share Posted July 26, 2004 Thank you Bob. Just mixing-and-matching the slavono-germanic archeology (mummies in the bogs) with slavonic mythology (Perun, vodyany, Zmiy) with Western fantasy - good dragon. Thought it could be fun Link to comment
BigRob Posted July 27, 2004 Share Posted July 27, 2004 I like the whole theme of the story. Sacrifice for one's people, becoming a champion but losing one's humanity in the process. Great! Link to comment
Domi Posted July 27, 2004 Share Posted July 27, 2004 Thank you, Rob. I think in a way any champion of his/her people lose his or her humanity to the task... Link to comment
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