Bri Posted November 3, 2004 Share Posted November 3, 2004 Let me first state that I didn't really catch too much dislike of Keldorn in the story. Oh, it was definitely not pro-Keldorn, but that is a fair stance to take in a story. After all, he does favor duty over his family, though as a paladin he should be able to balance both. I will admit that this is some of your clearest writing I've seen Domi. A theme I liked and you introduced was how Vesper was growing up...and Keldorn wasn't there at all. The only part that had me partially scratching my head was the small bit with Sir Ryan. Did Keldorn do something, and now he is in trouble? Or will this be expounded later? Link to comment
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