Kulyok Posted August 8, 2007 Author Share Posted August 8, 2007 Ooooh! My only concern(the banner speed is reasonable, I think) is the first frame. It suggests that Bhaalspawn is male, when most of the encounters are for females; I'm just afraid people might have the wrong idea. Could you please change it to text only? Other than that, wow. Link to comment
jastey Posted August 8, 2007 Share Posted August 8, 2007 What Kulyok said (plus it looks like Anomen's mouth, to be honest..) And I would change the text to "Do not disturb... Romantic encounters". Makes more sense to me. (Like it is now, it looks as if the mod's name is "Do not disturb"..) I like that one very much, too, as a draft. Link to comment
BigRob Posted August 9, 2007 Share Posted August 9, 2007 Jastey and Kulyok both make good points. You could fix up the male only aspect by including a female face in the second frame, or possibly having male and female faces on both initial frames. For the mod's name, you might shift it to a black frame after the door opens (so that the sign only reads "Do Not Disturb"). But it's a good job though, and more complex than anything I would have attempted. Nice work on the animating sign, must've taken ages to do. Link to comment
Solar's Harper Posted August 9, 2007 Share Posted August 9, 2007 Looks great, but I've gotta agree with what Kulyok has said, most of the RE's are designed for the Female PC's. Perhaps a slide of alternating differences, one half male, the other side female. And a sort of blending barrier should make them appear different, yet not seperated, I think the inclusion of just the lower part of the eye would also tip viewers to the difference. Man, its harder to explain than I thought. Ah well, I'll just say you're on the right track there wonnimchunha. Keep up the good work! btw, love that openning comment. Link to comment
Kulyok Posted August 9, 2007 Author Share Posted August 9, 2007 Oh, no need to do male/female faces(after all, all protagonists look differently), just some text. Link to comment
wonnimchunha Posted August 9, 2007 Share Posted August 9, 2007 okee, retinkered a little can't help the horrible image quality if it's gonna be under 50 kb which one do you prefer? By wonnimchunha By wonnimchunha Link to comment
berelinde Posted August 9, 2007 Share Posted August 9, 2007 I like the second one, but "A G3 Mod" is very difficult to read. Any chance of making it a lighter blue? Link to comment
Kulyok Posted August 9, 2007 Author Share Posted August 9, 2007 I like number 2, too. Link to comment
Evaine Dian Posted August 9, 2007 Share Posted August 9, 2007 I prefer the second one, too. I think the yellow of the doors is too bright, though. The doors don't have the "mediaeval" feel to them BG2 has. Also, I find the "Do not disturb" very difficult to read (I don't have problems with "A G3 mod", though). Link to comment
jcompton Posted August 9, 2007 Share Posted August 9, 2007 Nobody else is confused by the uncomfortable wording of "When a Bhaalspawn gets going"? Normally that's the rejoinder to "when the going gets tough" which, unless it is some sort of ironic statement about the nature of tenderness expressed by someone who can turn into a slavering killbeast, doesn't really make sense here... Link to comment
Catseye Posted August 10, 2007 Share Posted August 10, 2007 Nobody else is confused by the uncomfortable wording of "When a Bhaalspawn gets going"? We can always change it to something like "When things get tough for a Bhaalspawn"..... Link to comment
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